1. key points
1)1 paragraph = 1 idea
2)Give away the punch line early (早点给出结论)
3)Paragraph flow 流畅度
a. logical flow of ideas
??Sequential in time
??General to specific
??Logical arguments (if a then b; a therefore b)
b. parallel sentence structures
c. if necessary, transition words
??不要过度依赖过渡词
??越简单越好(but, and...)
4)Your reader remembers the first sentence and the last sentence best.
Make the last sentence memorable. Emphasis at the end!
2. A few more tips
1)repetition
It's OK to repeat a word!
2)key words
3)acronyms
a. Use only standard acryonyms/initialisms
b. If you must use acronyms, define them separately in the abstract, each table/figure, and the text.